TY - JOUR
T1 - Poor writing, not specialized concepts, drives processing difficulty in legal language
AU - Martı́nez, Eric
AU - Mollica, Francis
AU - Gibson, Edward
N1 - Funding Information:
We thank the Brain and Cognitive Science department at MIT for funding this research.
Publisher Copyright:
© 2022 The Authors
PY - 2022/7/1
Y1 - 2022/7/1
N2 - Despite their ever -increasing presence in everyday life, contracts remain notoriously inaccessible to laypeople. Why? Here, a corpus analysis (n ≈ 1 0 million words) revealed that contracts contain startlingly high proportions of certain difficult-to-process features –including low -frequency jargon, center-embedded clauses (leading to long-distance syntactic dependencies), passive voice structures, and non-standard capitalization–relative to nine other baseline genres of written and spoken English . Two experiments ( N=184 ) further revealed that excerpts containing these features were recalled and comprehended at lower rates than excerpts without these features, even for experienced readers, and that center-embedded clauses inhibited recall more-so than other features. These findings (a) undermine the specialized concepts account of legal theory, according to which law is a system built upon expert knowledge of technical concepts; (b) suggest such processing difficulties result largely from working -memory limitations imposed by long-distance syntactic dependencies (i.e., poor writing) as opposed to a mere lack of specialized legal knowledge ; and (c) suggest editing out problematic features of legal texts would be tractable and beneficial for society at-large.
AB - Despite their ever -increasing presence in everyday life, contracts remain notoriously inaccessible to laypeople. Why? Here, a corpus analysis (n ≈ 1 0 million words) revealed that contracts contain startlingly high proportions of certain difficult-to-process features –including low -frequency jargon, center-embedded clauses (leading to long-distance syntactic dependencies), passive voice structures, and non-standard capitalization–relative to nine other baseline genres of written and spoken English . Two experiments ( N=184 ) further revealed that excerpts containing these features were recalled and comprehended at lower rates than excerpts without these features, even for experienced readers, and that center-embedded clauses inhibited recall more-so than other features. These findings (a) undermine the specialized concepts account of legal theory, according to which law is a system built upon expert knowledge of technical concepts; (b) suggest such processing difficulties result largely from working -memory limitations imposed by long-distance syntactic dependencies (i.e., poor writing) as opposed to a mere lack of specialized legal knowledge ; and (c) suggest editing out problematic features of legal texts would be tractable and beneficial for society at-large.
U2 - 10.1016/j.cognition.2022.105070
DO - 10.1016/j.cognition.2022.105070
M3 - Article
SN - 0010-0277
VL - 224
JO - Cognition
JF - Cognition
M1 - 105070
ER -